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相信正在备考雅思的小伙伴,都有过背诵分类话题词汇的经历,做噩梦也想在考试中运用出来,可是真的好难.....,原因之一是大家没有深度学习词汇「剑桥英语在用」词汇深度学习,没有上下文和例句结合记忆。
建议大家利用好经典教材,结合雅思写作考题,进行遣词造句或仿写。下面我们结合新概念英语第四册 Lesson 33 Education,分析一道雅思写作考题,其实好素材就在身边,只是我们没有利用好!
文章开头很好的阐述了教育的重要性:
Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without an education, many of us believe, is an unfortunate victim of adverse circumstances, deprived of one of the greatest twentieth-century opportunities.
教育是我们这个时代的关键词之一。我们许多人都相信,一个没有受过教育的人, 是逆境的牺牲品, 被剥夺了20世纪的最优越的机会之一。
雅思写作中有很多关于教育类的考题,比如:学校教育到底应该采取通才教育还是专才教育。
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
很多同学不会引入背景,开头句习惯运用套句:Nowadays,an increasing number of people are concerned about... 但是考官看到太多类似的句子,难免会被判定为套句。其实,适当改写原文句子,就可以得到一个地道且具体的背景句:
Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education, many of us believe is the victim of adversity.
再比如原文句子:
Convinced ofthe importance of education, modern states "invest" in institutions of learning to get back "interest" in the form of a large group of enlightened young men and women who are potential leaders.
现代国家深深懂得教育的重要性,对教育机构投资,收回的‘利息’便是培养出大批有知识的男女青年,成为未来的栋梁。
上面的句子经过改写,我们可以用来解释教育的好处:
越来越多的国家意识到了教育的重要性,开始加大教育投资,旨在培养年轻有为的知识青年成为国家的栋梁之才。Convinced of the importance of education, a great many countries are increasingly investing significant amounts of money and energy in cultivating a large group of enlightened young men and women who are potential leaders.
再来看原文一段话:
Education in the wilderness is not a matter of monetary means.All are entitled to an equal start.There is none of the hurry which, in our society, often hampers the full development of a growing personality.There,a child grows up under the ever-present attention of his parent.荒凉地区的教育不是钱的问题,所有的人都享有平等起步的权利。那里没有我们今天社会中的匆忙生活,而匆忙的生活常常妨碍个性的全面发展。荒凉地区的孩子无时无刻不在父母关怀下成长。
引用上面的段落的表达,可以得到观点:专才教育可能会阻碍一个人的全面发展。
If students are restricted to learn in certain domain, it may hamper the full development of a growing personality.如果限制学生只能学习固定领域知识,这可能会阻碍他们的个性的全面发展。
原创习作(仅供参考)
Nowadays, most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 2015年11月21日
Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education, many of us believe is the victim of adversity. However, people’s views differ greatly as to whether or not specialist is superior to generalist. In my opinion, focusing on academic study in university enjoys more benefits.
Granted,those who advocate vocational training are, to some extent, never without their reasons. First, vocational skills can help learners secure well-paid jobs quickly;therefore, the family’s financial burden can be greatly reduced. For instance, job candidates from vocational training schools are very popular because what they have learnt are career-oriented and job-related. In comparison with studying a wide range of subjects,specializing in specific field can make one stand out in a crowd considering that one’s time and energy is limited.
However,we can never ignore the immense value of academic study at university.The most glaring merit is that those who receive university education have plenty of room for career development because they have access to manifold knowledge and techniques. In addition to tapping one’s unlimited potentials in various aspects and helping one realize full development of a growing personality, experiencing university life can bring more wonderful memories of colorful campus life. Last, this can benefit a nation, all-round education can train more comprehensive talents for a country, which will inject new life into the further development of a nation.
Overall, my stand is that compared with attending vocational training schools, receiving university education is more feasible and rational because it helps students realize comprehensive development and cultivate more personal talents. Likewise, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge.
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